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L watched contently as his “Friend” Light Yagami studied for school. He popped a strawberry into his mouth, and continued eyeing not Light’s paper, but his face, His smooth, perfected face… Light looked up at L, who continued to stare.
“What is it Ryuzaki?”
“Yagami-Kun… You haven’t a single blemish on your face…”
Light tried hard not to smirk at this small remark, but instead replied, “That’s why girls love me… They fall for smooth faces like mine.
L Smiled, and then wiggled his toes. But before L could look away, Light stroked his pallid face slowly; His fingers cold against his tender skin.
L Looked up at Light, “Yagami-Kun… what are you--...” Light silenced him by looking up sharply into his dark eyes. L Shut his mouth quite tightly; he did not trust Light’s gaze, and didn’t enjoy locking with it, so he looked away quickly, standing up from Light’s grasp.
“Don’t Yagami-kun…”
Light stood up, not only because of the shackles that held the two together, but out of pure curiosity.
“Ryuzaki, what is--...” L turned towards Light and punched him right in the face. Fallowing quickly after the falling Light, L kneeled beside him, “Yaga---...” Light looked up from his hand; his nose was bleeding, and punched L in the face as well.
“You Ass-hole, what’s your PROBLEM?!” Light yelled at L angrily, as he slowly stood up.
“I am sorry Yagami-Kun… But your gaze is too much… Please don’t look at me…”
Light just stared angrily back at L. confused, and angry, he took a hold of L by the shirt, “What’s that supposed to mean? Will it decrease your smartness by 30% or some crap like that?”
L Smirked, “No…” he said looking down, not wanting to meet that gaze…
“Please… Don’t look at me Yagami-kun, or I’ll raise your chance of being Kira by exactly 50%...”
Light Grimaced, “What sort of threat is that?! Now tell me, Why Can’t I Look at you??!”
L shook his head, “Why would you want to look?”
Light was taken back quite dramatically, “What… what’s that supposed to mean?”
L Looked only at Light’s mouth, “Do you gain any sort of Satisfaction by looking at me, Yagami-Kun? Any sort of pleasure whatsoever?”
Light let go of his tight grasp on L’s shirt. The two sat silently, almost as if Light was hesitating to respond.
“No? Fine then Yagami-kun, that gives you no reason to look at me…” he said about to stand up, but before he could, he was brought down, facing directly into Light’s eyes. Light cupped L’s chin and stared deeply into those dark eyes…
“Is my stare your weakness, L?”  L’s already large eyes widened, what felt like tears prickled at them…
“L-Light-Kun…” he whispered under his breath.
Light smirked in silent satisfaction, “I’m guessing I was correct…” His eyes gleaming like licks of flame.
Light continued to stare into L’s eyes, but then his smile slowly faded as L bit his bottom lip.
A single tear rolled down L’s cheek, “nnh…” He groaned quietly. His eyes welled up, and he closed them tightly, his face covered with tears. Light let out a small unwanted gasp, as he let go of L’s chin… L curled into a ball, small sobs could be heard.
Light couldn’t believe it, had his very stare done this much to one of the strongest people he knew? Had his eyes brought his very enemy to tears?
“Ryuzaki…” He whispered reaching for his companion’s back. He hesitated, and slowly placed his hand on his back, sliding it slowly over it.
L Slowly stopped sobbing, each one hurting Light more and more. It was true; he had developed feelings for his enemy, L. And here he was, “Petting” him, because his own eyes made L cry.
“L… I have something to tell you…”
“It’s Ryuzaki to you…” A small muffled voice came from what seemed like a little boy…
“R-Ryuzaki… I… am very sorry…. I actually, am really quite fond of--...”
Before Light could finish, he was being tightly embraced by L, who now was sobbing in Light’s shoulder, his arms wrapped around his Neck. Light hesitated, but then slowly put his arms around Ryuzaki’s waist…


“I love you…” The two boys whispered to eachother.

This only took about 30 minutes and isn't at all that literate, but I like how it came out, and it's one of my first little, "Yaoi" stories. :3 Lx Light everybody. :3

Death note and Charecters property of: Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata/ SHonen Jump
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Amazingirl360 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DOSDEYO? SO KAWAII!
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villiantimewleeannn Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
D'o mahgawd. Even though you got the genre wrong, (it's not yaoi, it's shonen-ai :) I can't even make a troll face because it's so cute! (btw yaoi is a porn version of gay while shonen-ai is a K-T genre. :D)
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wert200024 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm sorta cryin right now... the story made me feel really sad and depressed, but the weird thing is, i have no idea why this story made me so sad... :sick:
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Spartan2016 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Aw aw so cute
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oliviajudd Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Vladroxmysox Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwwww poor L :(
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Blue-Rainy-Night Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011   Digital Artist
cute! are u going to b writing a part 2?
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Thejazzy12 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
omg is there a part two
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AyameAshima Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Aww, this is SO CUTE!!! I loved it!!! X3
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6Sasu6Hina6 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
KYAAAAA!!!!! KAWAIIIII!!! :heart::heart::heart:
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deathnotefan2222 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Student General Artist
awsome!!!!
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Kogaluver234 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Student Writer
AGH SOOOOO CUTE!
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Lilylily7000 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
sooo cuteeee! lol at light's stare of powah!
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tiny-french-vampire Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
can i submit it to an L and Light group?
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tiny-french-vampire Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
Oh wow that was soo cute
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deathtothebunny Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
zomg! so damned cute!
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XCrazy-ShunshineX Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
It was cute, that's true, but both of them are awfully OOC. I like that it's short and sweet, though.
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Gaaragirl7 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
yay! it was great!! i loved it!
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zomgpoptarts Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
Oh, my, God. That was sooo cute.
:3
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sarahkimmio Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2009
oh the ending was so kawaii! :D
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kawaiicara-chan Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*total fangirl scream*CAN THIS HAPPEN?PLEASE?
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
We should make it happen!
A PETITION IS IN ORDER.
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kawaiicara-chan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YES!!!!!!!!!
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We-Are-So-Dead Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009  Student General Artist
Aww!! ^.^ I really really liked it! Not that it would ever happen 'cause L is mine, but... >.> It's cute. XD Good job, I really, really liked it. :3
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blackkbutterflyyx33 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
AWESOME!!! *SQUEES LIKE A FAN GIRL*

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Me: Guess what?
You: What?
Me: I took your virginity!
You: WHAT!?!
Me: Its inside this bottle. *Shows bottle with water in it:P*
You: OMFG!! YOU TOOK MY VIRGINITY!!! GIVE IT BACK!!
Me: I can't... its under my possesion.
You: But your a girl!?!
Me: Yeah, but I can get guys, who know guys, who know guys who haven't done 'IT' yet. *plants smirk on face*
You: Well, i'm going to tell my DADDY!! MY FRIEND TOOK MY VIRGINITY!!!
Me: *Stays calm*
Your Daddy: WHO!?! I'LL CRUSH HIM!!
You: Its her *Points to me.*
Your Daddy: Oh, how can she take your virginity?!
You: Boys, Dad... boys.
Me: *chuckles*

Sry this is sorta long lmao.. mmk
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animerulez12460 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
i thought this was very cute! fantastic job!
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kiro2mishagori Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww!!! that was so sweet ^^
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MsMuffinLady Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2009
I enjoyed this one. t was different from some others I have read :)
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mal4556 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009  Student General Artist
damn thats hot :horny:
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sakucheese5 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
Interesting. It had my attention for the whole thing. And it was good without it being to graphic...
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't really want them to kiss or go too far. It's like, feelings in development. ANd thank you. =D
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sakucheese5 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
Wow, you are one of the first people to really say that. Most people like that sort of stuff... but thats totally cool. You should write some more things, good job.
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much. I could try. ^^
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ashureia Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I loved it! :D
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. =D
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ashureia Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob!
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
In some ways, it was quite powerful that he died. But they definitely should not have done it so soon. L vs. Kira is basically the whole story and such a huge part!

Plus I hate mello and near, mostly because they will never live up to L.

T_T
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Nakamura-Sakura Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009   Writer
Uh ... this might sound really dum but uhh ...

Who are Mello, Matt and Near? :blush: I'm up to chapter 58 - do they feature in the story later on? x
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
No, no worries. They show up later. I can't tell you for fear of ruining surprises :0
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Nakamura-Sakura Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009   Writer
Aaah! *bangheadontable* lol. I took Which DN Character Are You? tests all night yesterday and I'm apparently Mello and L by a landslide. :P x
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
hahaha awwwwwkward
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Near is like a Wannabe L.
On about a billion levels.. >>
Though, I must admit, I do quite enjoy Mello's personality. XD
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
I try, but they just can't replace the L hole in my heart T_T

lol plus I thought mello was a girl when I first saw him...
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh me too!! Maybe it's his hair. >>

L was just so loveable
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
Partially his hair, mostly the way he holds everything *swoons*
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*swoons with*
XD
I LOVE his hair.
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2009
*dives into a pool of L's hair and basks*

Oh god. I'm a creep.
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You and me, hun. XD
We need to make a L'S Hair fanclub. Not an L club, just his hair.
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CheetoReaper Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2009
I liek this a looooot!

It's more true to the characters than most other yaois (though would L cry? lol I don't know...) which makes it better and more realistic. Plus, it makes perfect sense why they would fall in love.

So cute!
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sakuragirlram Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I started to feel more against the bit with L crying more and more after I published it, but I imagine him to have this sort of sweet pansy side to him that you have to dig deep to get to.
But thank you very much! ^^
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